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The deisgn itself is quite beautiful and it's very appealing to the eye. However, more shading around the legs, face, mane, tail, knees...

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Brothers: A Storyshift Story Pg2 by ImaBanana84 Brothers: A Storyshift Story Pg2 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 4 0 Mine (SmudgeandFrank Fanart) by ImaBanana84 Mine (SmudgeandFrank Fanart) :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 2 0 Brothers: A Storyshift Story - Pg1 by ImaBanana84 Brothers: A Storyshift Story - Pg1 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 0 0 Brothers A Storyshift Story Cover by ImaBanana84 Brothers A Storyshift Story Cover :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 2 1 10 Minutes, 1 Minute, 10 seocnds challenge - Sans by ImaBanana84 10 Minutes, 1 Minute, 10 seocnds challenge - Sans :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 2 1 Random Sasuke Doodle (Without legs) by ImaBanana84 Random Sasuke Doodle (Without legs) :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 0 1 Sans sheet by ImaBanana84 Sans sheet :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 7 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 7 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 1 I'll Just Have To carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 6 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 6 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0 I don't want to let go... (Undertale) by ImaBanana84 I don't want to let go... (Undertale) :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 0 0 Undertale Genocide Route Poster by ImaBanana84 Undertale Genocide Route Poster :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 5 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 5 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 4 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 4 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 2 0 See Ya Later, Doggo. (R.I.P Gabe) by ImaBanana84 See Ya Later, Doggo. (R.I.P Gabe) :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 0 1 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 3 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg 3 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic)  Pg2 by ImaBanana84 I'll Just Have To Carry You (Undertale Comic) Pg2 :iconimabanana84:ImaBanana84 1 0

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The deisgn itself is quite beautiful and it's very appealing to the eye. However, more shading around the legs, face, mane, tail, knees, hooves and eyes would add more to this deign. And when I mean shading, I mean shadows. The appoloosa like spots on her back would look much better is they were blended in, like what you did with her foal design. More muscle detail around the face and eyes would also be good to show off her body and strength. Apart from that, the blending of the white and blue is beautiful and it's a very nice design.
Brothers: A Storyshift Story Pg2
Here's the second page! This was my first time drawing Gaster and honestly I'm really proud of it XD. Again, Gaster may or may not have been king, but who cares. He will be for the sake of this comic (I know that Sans is King btw). But anyway, I was thinking that maybe I should wait until a few pages are done and then release them all at once instead of posting one and then having you guys wait until the next page. What do you guys think? Anyway, that's it for now. Bye!
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Mine (SmudgeandFrank Fanart)
Hey guys! So Smudge and Frank is one of the artists that I look up to and they inspired me to make my Undertale AU (which is yet to be adapted into a comic) and my short crappy mini-comic 'I'll Just Have To Carry You'. So, they have an animation in the works called 'Mine'. I've seen that character sheets for the lead roles, Coal and Jewel, and I immediately fell in love with them. So of course, I HAD to draw some fanart. So, here it is! I cannot wait until the release of this animation, though I won't rush her since animating is REALLY hard. Welp, that's it for now. Bye!

(P.S the second page of Brothers will be out on Wednesday.)

Coal and Jewel by: smudgeandfrank.deviantart.com/

Programs Used: Paint Tool SAI

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TheHyperFangirl21 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Just saying, I REALLY like your style :)
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